I don't like it..sorry, but you want the truth right?
These 4 pictures look ok, except for the top and the sides.
what I mean is, your "drawing" looked superb and feminine,
not square and "butch" looking...
the square top just looks like the Triumph Triangle was an after thought,
instead of like the picture you drew where everything "flows" together...
Wife said the drawing was gorgeous, that's what she was hoping for.