Noted. Thanks.
How about:

Lessons in Lunacy II: The Nut Still Has a Screw Loose

I like the sub-title although you lose the search engine without "motorcycle". I guess whereever it is offered should include meta tags that include "motorcycle".

Personally, I like the "More Lessons..." rather than "II". but that's just me.

hmmm...reading it again...how about dropping "still" and going with "The Nut Has a Screw Loose".
 
I like the sub-title although you lose the search engine without "motorcycle". I guess whereever it is offered should include meta tags that include "motorcycle".

Personally, I like the "More Lessons..." rather than "II". but that's just me.

hmmm...reading it again...how about dropping "still" and going with "The Nut Has a Screw Loose".

That looks like a winner!!!

More Lessons in Lunacy:
A Motorcycle Nut With A Screw Loose

I'll be submitting the manuscript this month, if it's accepted with the title you win a free autographed book and T-shirt. (Note the publisher takes about 3 months from accepted manuscript to actual hard copies).
 
woohoo!!!

another option to shorten the sub-title:

More Lessons in Lunacy -
A Motorcycle Nut Has a Screw Loose

My niece who's working on her doctorate in English could help me here to explain.

When I read "...with a screw loose" it sounds like you are telling me that you have a screw loose.

When I read"...has a screw loose" it draws me in via curiosity as to why you have a screw loose.

just my 2c again. I really look forward to the next edition.
 
woohoo!!!

another option to shorten the sub-title:

More Lessons in Lunacy -
A Motorcycle Nut Has a Screw Loose

My niece who's working on her doctorate in English could help me here to explain.

When I read "...with a screw loose" it sounds like you are telling me that you have a screw loose.

When I read"...has a screw loose" it draws me in via curiosity as to why you have a screw loose.

just my 2c again. I really look forward to the next edition.

I'll run both by the publisher, see what gets saluted....:rolleyes:
 
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